Challenge poem

I only mustered one for February. I was off gallivanting rather than slaving over a hot keyboard. Ooh, a heated keyboard would be spiffy!

And He Held Out

And he held out
his hand and I put
the bolts there

and he said is that
all and I said it was
all I could find that

the shell was burned
like a house charred
down to rafters

and joists and he
asked which are
the rafters which

the joists and I
said my ribs are
the rafters my ribs

the tall arching rafters
of my church and my
spine the joist and

my heart was
the furnace but
it’s gone and

here’s what’s left
and he smiled and
curled his hand and

I knew he meant
to look for more
later while I sleep

3 thoughts on “Challenge poem”

  1. Very subtle use of repetition and scheme, and to good effect. Good effect in that it makes me happy, happiness of the places I’ve been and wish I was there again variety.

    Who is the minister of my church? I don’t know.

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